Here's a little story that is my latest online publication. The good folks at Necessary Fiction gave me a marvelous opportunity to submit a rewrite on this story. Their editor gifted me with his assessment of the original including where the story strayed from the narrative voice and became didactic. It was a free writing lesson and apparently this student understood what was meant. FYI, I had to go to the dictionary to understand didactic. Yes, I go there often. Point taken. Enjoy the story. Thank you Necessary Fiction. Here's On Behalf of Women.